The absolute disjunct nature of this video really makes it difficult to follow and more difficult to get into. Also, I think the foley man needs to be drowned in that weird bathtub. The creaking door, the flushing toilet, the running water are all too much and take away from the nearly non-existent storyline. The over-wrought voice overs are all too much.
The other area of contention I have this this short video is the lack of dialogue. When the "older woman" (though I could not tell who was older and who was younger... bad casting there) gets in the tub and then tries to give us a "come hither" look, I thought that was just sad. When she uses her finger in a "come here" gesture, I completely lost interest. The production really tried too hard with the foley man and the voice overs so I wonder why they couldn't simply put in translation subtext to finish off their overworking of this episode?
The other area of contention I have this this short video is the lack of dialogue. When the "older woman" (though I could not tell who was older and who was younger... bad casting there) gets in the tub and then tries to give us a "come hither" look, I thought that was just sad. When she uses her finger in a "come here" gesture, I completely lost interest. The production really tried too hard with the foley man and the voice overs so I wonder why they couldn't simply put in translation subtext to finish off their overworking of this episode?