"Oh, I think I'm going to cum again alre

Here's a little thing that I'm working on that is about a guy with a huge cock who is about to take me in the ass........this is in the style that comprises most of my book. I think that this could be the start of another chapter......

"Oh yeah, you motherfucker, lick my ass" I hissed as you ran your tongue back and forth between my clit and my asshole. "Oh, I think I'm going to cum again already!" I shouted as I sprayed my orgasmic load right into your face. You opened up your mouth and as my cum filled it, you swallowed and then opened wide for more. "Baby, you taste so sweet," you said with a smirk on your face, my cum dripping off of your chin and onto my stomach.

Grabbing me by my knees and then putting my legs onto your shoulders, you guided the head of your enormous cock into my crotch, running it up and down my slit, lubricating it with my vaginal juices. "Now it's time," you said rather quietly as you pressed your cock against my asshole. Straining, I could feel your massive cockhead enter my ass and then slowly and gradually you pressed on until you were burried balls deep inside of me. Then you began to pick up the pace, fucking me faster and harder.

"Oh FUCK yeah!" I screamed as you slid your huge cock in and out of my ass. I grabbed fistfulls of the sheets on the bed and arched my back. My nipples were hard and fully erect, and you pinched them between your thumbs and forefingers as you fucked me hard. "Oh God yes! Fuck me baby!" I screamed as my body began to convulse. My pussy began to spasm with your cock still deep in my ass. "That's right, cum hard now you dirty little bitch," you snarled as I sprayed a streak of cum against your abdomen. "Oh thank you baby, I love your beautiful cock baby," I said to you and we kissed. "Now I want you to finish up and cum in my mouth......"

It still needs a lot of work but it is starting to 'cum' around, don't you think?
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Posted by sparky1721
4 years ago    Views: 1,255
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3 years ago
very good rough draft
4 years ago
That's a nasty story, like it
4 years ago
Excellent writing! Very hot.
4 years ago
Absolutely Amazing :)
Alice522
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4 years ago
Nice start! However, her cum scene sounds more like a man cumming than a woman. Me, personally, I don't do ass to mouth, but if that turns somebody on, that's no problem for me. Keep up the good work and add more detail.
4 years ago
Love it,i'm getting horny,oh god!!
4 years ago
Liked what Ive read so far - particularly opening his mouth and drinking your cum, so graphic, so sensual. Thanks
4 years ago
Baby I just loved it. You have an enormous talent. I almost cum from just reading what you have here. Please continue with this. I think your on the road to an erotic work of art. This tells me just how sexy you really are
4 years ago
cant wait to read the rest
HighPlain...
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4 years ago
fantastic, your a very visual writer, the Cormac McCarthy of erotic writers
roanco
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4 years ago
Great!