first time for everything

I have never written a story before, so please tell me what you all honestly think!

I was 17 at the time and my older b*****r Sean, was away at college. He was 19 in shape due to the fact that he always played sports in high school. He was 6'1 short brown hair, dark brown eyes, 170 pounds and a muscular build. I on the other hand was in shape but very curvy. It had always bothered me that I was did not look like the girls on the magazines and such. I was about 5'4, I had short light brown hair and the same dark brown eyes as Sean. I was a 36D breast size, small waist, hips and an ass. I had to get used to the fact that I was not like the other girls in my class and get over it.

I had come home from class one day, and found Sean in the living room. I sat on the couch next to him, dropping my bag next to me. "Hey what are you doing home? I thought that you had exams to take this week?" I looked over at him. A grin on his face and I could only imagine what it was from. "No, exams are next week, so I thought I would spend the weekend here at home." He said as he winked at me. I stood up and walked back into the kitchen. "Where are mom and dad?" I asked as I grabbed a bottle of water. "Out for the weekend." he said as I looked over at him. "Thought they would have a weekend alone." I knew he was home for a reason. I am 17 and yet not old enough to stay home alone. "So you are here to babysit?" I said sarcasticly. The grin was back "yea, can't leave you all alone in the house!" He got up off the couch and walked over to me. He put his hand on my shoulder "don't worry little s*s, it's ok, I won't be in your hair all weekend." He slid his his hand down my back and gave me a tap on the ass. I turned around quickly "what the hell was that for?" My cheeks flushed red, I actually liked it. What was wrong with me? This is my b*****r. I walked away, as I turned the corner I looked back to see him grinning again......

This is crazy I kept telling myself as I walked up the stairs to my room. Why did Sean tap my ass? I pushed it from my mind and went to my room. I was so frustrated that I decided the best thing to do would be to take a shower. I walked into the bathroom and turned on the water. I undressed and stepped in, letting the hot water rush over me. I was angry at my parents for not trusting me enough to stay home alone, and at the fact that Sean was acting so strange. I grabbed a sponge and some shower gel. I started to wash myself. Moving along my arms and shoulders. To my breasts, I was turning myself on, and thought what's the harm. I ran my fingers over my breasts again, feeling my nipples harden..mmm I moved my other hand lower, going down my stomach and to my pussy. I teased myself. Circling my clit, rubbing a little harder. I was so into it that I did not hear the door open. Or that Sean had walked in, and was undressing. He stepped in the shower behind me as I felt myself begin to orgasm...I felt a hand touch my shoulder. Move lower down my back. I jumped, "SEAN!! what are you doing!!!???" I stepped out of the shower and grabbed my towel. I ran back to my room and closed the door.

My head was spinning with questions..WHAT the hell was he doing???? I am his s****r! WHY?? Sean knocked on the door "Julia, open up. We need to talk. Just open the door." I opened the door and stepped back away from him. "Why did you do that Sean?" He walked to me, the towel was tied losely around his waist. "Don't worry about that." He walked closer to me, "Sean you said you wanted talk, so explain." I took another step back. I was pressed against the bed. I grabbed my towel and held it tighter. "Sean, what is going on?" I couldn't help but notice how good he looked in that towel. What am I thinking?? I looked away and when I looked back at him, he was standing a foot in front of me. He looked down at me, putting his hand on my shoulder. Sliding it lower, over my towel. Feeling my nipples through the fabric. "Sean....we can't do this..." He took the last step and was now had his chest touching mine. He let his towel drop. I looked away, "Sean...this..this..is wrong." He leaned down to kiss me, pulling the towel away at the same time...I was not ready for that. I pulled away and tried to grab the towel. He was faster and had already thrown the towel to the door. "Julia, calm down. I just want to show you how badly I want you." I could see that he was already hard. "I want to finish what you started in the shower. You looked so sexy standing there with your legs spread and a finger sliding over your sweat pussy. I wanted to fuck you there, but you ran."

I was shocked to hear him say this. I am his s****r. I tried to push him away, but I was unable. I looked up at him "Sean, no! I won't do this!" I pushed one last time before he slammed me on the bed. "I am going to have this one way or another. You can either enjoy it with me, or I can just take it." I could feel his hard cock pressed against my pussy, as much as I hated to admit it, I liked the way it felt. He pressed his hips harder against me. "Sean, stop!" I tried to keep my composure, tried not to moan as I felt him slide his cock against me. "So this is how you want it? You want to fight me? Fine." He pulled my hands above my head and held them there. He took his other hand and ran it down my body. Going lower to my pussy. As he traced a finger over me, he slipped one inside. It took everything not to moan out. He noticed and smiled, "For a girl so against this, you are very wet." he said as he winked at me. I looked away, trying not to show him I liked it. I kept trying to pull my hands aways as I felt his lips on my breasts. He was moving them lower, licking my nipples. Teasing them, running his tongue over them, gently nipping them. I moved my hips under him. I couldn't help but like it. I accidentally let out a moan as he slipped another finger inside my pussy, and licked my nipple. He let go of my hands as he began to move lower. Kissing my stomach, my hips down to my waist. I knew what was coming but still the annticipation was killing me. He slid his fingers out as his lips reached my pussy. He gently kissed my pussy. I moaned out, not carring anymore about the fact that he was my b*****r. He spread my pussy lips licking me gently at first. Then starting to go faster, pressing his tongue against me harder.. I couldn't stop my hips from going up, wanting more of his touch. I moaned out, getting louder as his strokes became faster. He put a hand on my hip to keep my steady. He moved his other hand over my pussy and slid a finger back in, and start to thrust it in and out. OHH! how good that felt. As he continued to touch me, I felt myself getting closer and closer to that bliss.. "SEAN, I..I'm abo.out to.....!!!!!" was all I was able to say as I felt the orgasm hit, wave after wave of pleasure washed over me. My hips moving up wanting it to go on forever. As I felt the last of my orgasm wash over me, Sean started to kiss back up my body......

Please tell me what you think! Honest opinons are appreciated!
90% (15/2)
 
Categories: First Time
Posted by rime923091
3 years ago    Views: 986
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2 years ago
I liked it, thanks for sharing
2 years ago
Too short, fractured sentences, no flow to emit even keeled emotions nor feelings. Little more detail would enhance the feelings trying to been transported to the reader.

Story subject--brother and sister--is ideal but should have less brutish behavior of the brother.
2 years ago
Nice and exciting but needs developing. More detail of the characters and slower build to the climax. Only way is to write more and more and I loved the theme. As for the force aspect, it wasn't rape. She wanted to be taken and he pushed. Rape is a totally different matter and should always be condemned. A lucky girl and a very lucky brother! MORE DETAIL!
3 years ago
nice but i agree with discobob2
3 years ago
ok story,don't like he had to force her to "enjoy it" not enough character development,sex in 500 words or less is not good,need to tease the reader,,its not the orgasm that counts, its the journey!