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The creature that walks with rigid eyes askance
And raises eyebrow in intellectual glance

The creature that pursues prey with keen vigor
And applauds proudly when his spear is bigger

The creature that speaks slyly, with a secret goal
And trades courtly success for his own poor soul

The creature that makes me cringe and prance, all in a dainty trance
Such is his role

The creature that sulks in wounded brutish pride
Yet still sways broad shoulders side to side

And with bitter grin makes his remarks so snide
He tends to amuse and puzzle my mind

With imposing, muscled stance, this creature stands
Such is this majestic creature we call man.

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Porn Expert
comments: 258
March 28, 2011, 7:16 pm 
Why thank you. I'm glad we amuse and puzzle; a woman's mystery is no less enticing.

Porn Expert
comments: 167
May 8, 2010, 11:41 pm 
good job sweetie i like it

AustinEly1
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April 29, 2010, 9:44 am 
love it except ending, needs something ?? this thing once majestic as men, of kind, only in own mind a man. but well done, Ashamed to say, pretty accurate, Austin

PIMP
comments: 6281
April 27, 2010, 1:20 pm 
Very nice poem about us knuckle draggers.

Note how all the critical responses came from men? Just observing...

Pornstar
comments: 1233
April 26, 2010, 11:36 pm 
Well done...more please!

thickfat8
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April 26, 2010, 2:56 am 
I thought your poem discribes the manly presence us Alpha males project. ; )

Pornstar
comments: 1613
April 23, 2010, 8:45 pm 
i like it good job Gera :)

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