My first story

After a long day of shopping in NYC I go down to catch the subway. As I stand in my jeans and low cut shirt waiting, I check my phone to see a few missed calls. 'meh' I think to myself as the subway pulls up. As I bored I see a man in the corner all by himself, he is a good looking man but seems busy. 'Where is everybody?' I think to myself. I start go towards him just to make some small talk 'he must be on his phone or a portable game system' I think.

As I get closer I can see that he has his cock in his hand and he is pumping up and down. I get in front of him and he still does not notice me. I sit on the nasty floor of the subway and say out load 'HEY' he stops and stares in horror. 'You look like you need a hand' I say with a smile

I take his cock into my hand and start moving it up and down. My blue eyes look up to meet his, he looks kinda scarred. 'Don't worry, I'll be gentle' I say quietly. I move my face closer to his cock and blow on it. He can feel my breath on his cock and he shutters a little, I smile. I take the head into my mouth, my tongue teasing it in my mouth and my hand pumping up and down his shaft. He slams his hands down on the seats and looks up. I pull up my shirt to expose my breasts in a light blue seer bra.

I take my mouth off his member. He looks at me in shock as I pull my shirt off and and unhook my bra. I see his eye move from my flat pale tummy up to my nice breasts, he stops and stares at my pink erect nipples. I get onto my knees and place his cock between my tits, pressing my tits together on his cock, I start moving up and down letting him titty fuck me, I look down and spit on his cock and I smile.

I break away from his cock and stand up with a smile. I unbutton my pants and slowly unzip them. I turn around and slowly pull down my pants showing my tight butt in a blue thong. My jeans come off, I quickly drop the thong. I bend over in front of the handsome strange and tell him to fuck me. He stands up and I can feel the head of his cock move along my bald wet peach.

oh, I whimper, as he slides his cock into me. He places his hands on my hips and starts to gently thrust into me. 'Harder...Faster' I moan. He picks up his pace, his balls slapping against me, my breasts moving with each thrust into me. 'oh fuck' I let out as I move my hand of the set up to play with my breasts. 'You feel so good in me' I let out passionately.

He keeps pumping into me, ' OH MY GOD' I let out as he fucks to to a climax. I drop to my knees know he has yet to cum and take his hard cock into my mouth. I start sucking my juices of his cock, I taste so good on him. He grabs ahold of my head and I pick up my pace. I hear him let out a cry, *squirt, squirt, squirt* I feel his tasty hot cum hit the back of my throat. I take his cock out of my mouth and smile while still on my kness. He lets out a few more squirts that hit me on the face and run down to my breasts.

I clean up a little and put on some of the new clothes I bought 'good thing I went shopping I say to myself'. I hand him a sheet of paper with the name of the hotel and the room number. "I'll be in town for a few more days, feel free to come by" I tell him as I reach my stop.


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Posted by le_petit_gateau
5 months ago    Views: 1,442
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5 days ago
who says public transport is bad ? :)

look forward to reading more of your stories a big thumbs up ! x
7 days ago
Wow, very nice story. You should write some more :)
7 days ago
mmm great story!! really got me excited!
24 days ago
Nice wanking story :) It goes pretty well with your pictures ;P
1 month ago
well i enjoyed your story...fuck it annoys me when people make such ridiculous negative comments
1 month ago
very hott
1 month ago
really nice story
1 month ago
awesome! I wish it was me and you
1 month ago
Fantastic, Nevss is an ass...
2 months ago
Lots of improving to do. Sounded too fictional to be even fictional. Just put you straight into the action, didn't seem believable enough, couldn't really submerge into that fantasy. And too simple: im waiting in a Public place- i go talk to a wanking man- i wann him and fuck him immediately..AND I invite him to spend more intimate time. Hard to believe it. But keep trying ;).
2 months ago
Great first story, I think you have something here, please continue writing ;)
2 months ago
I'll think of you next time I take the Metro ;)
2 months ago
Love it! So hot
3 months ago
very hot story!!! i like the part "I start sucking my juices of his cock, I taste so good on him"
3 months ago
This had me biting my lips. I love sexual encounters in public, but have never had a woman take control of me on the subway. The rumble of the car on the tracks and the shifting around turns would make for a pleasurable experience.
3 months ago
What a huge turn on! What guy hasn't had a fantasy of this happening to him? I love all the sexy little descriptions.

"I move my face closer to his cock and blow on it. He can feel my breath on his cock and he shutters a little"

Just reading that line got my cock hard. Feeling a woman's warm breath on my cock is almost enough to jizz all over her face.

Great story. I hope you write more because I'll be sure to read them :)
3 months ago
Yum! Great work, loved it.
3 months ago
Belle histoire d'une fille qui n'as pas froid aux yeux !!
3 months ago
Very nice and brave. I liked it little one.
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3 months ago
Underground Quickie xD
3 months ago
Great story I like how you leave it to the reader as to whom the stranger is and what he looks like, in my mind he is black and has a huge cock!.... just my thoughts :) Thanks for sharing .
4 months ago
I like it. The girl is in charge yet without having to dominate the man. Empowered women knowing what they want. Thats the future right there!
4 months ago
Great story petit gateau !
5 months ago
Wow hot story.
5 months ago
Very sexy story. I was kind of hoping he would shot his load deep inside your tight pussy, getting bred by a strager is pretty fucking hot. Your choice of sucking him off and letting some of his seed dribble down onto your body almost had me climaxing!
5 months ago
This is really hot! You write really well, keep it up.
5 months ago
can I visit your room too?
5 months ago
very well written for a first attempt i'd like see any further efforts You make.
5 months ago
A classic! Fun to read this again :)
5 months ago
for your fist story, your off to great start its good to know you dont mind being exposed and like to fuck in public